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Prelude to Eternity

Prelude to Eternity

Painting Painting \ Uncategorized | 08/26/03 @777 | acidlullaby | Comments critiques (46) | Views views (15468)


Prelude to Eternity
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Practice run with my new Wacom ^_____^ Photoshop 6 and Painter Classic. Based loosely on a stock photo I saw on DA.
 
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Avatar Hybridos

 08/26/03 @785

WHOA, the hair is exelent!
 
Avatar Kirah

 08/26/03 @787

wow thats nice.. i assume you used photoreference...? even if you did its great ... the only thing i would critique is the few hairs that fall into the face.. somehow it doesnt fit and does not look as realistic as the rest.. i guess youre going for realism nonetheless good job +6
 
Avatar acidlullaby

 08/26/03 @788

yeah, the hair in the face is annoying me as well, I coulda sworn it didn't look so funky this morning. and photo ref was from Deviantart (don't remember user >_<;), no tracing or paint over obviously.
 
Avatar Foot

 08/26/03 @796

Looks great. Acid: if the hair on the face is bugging you, maybe making parts of it a little more opaque (say, when it is going over darker areas), and adding a little reflection will make it look a little more real... just a suggestion on what to do about it if it bugs you.

On the whole, it looks excellent.
 
Avatar acidlullaby

 08/26/03 @819

thanks ^_^ I'll try that
 
Iguana

 08/26/03 @865

This looks very good! Well done! Seems your new Wacom works perfect ;)
 
Avatar christinee

 08/26/03 @867

OMG that's awesome!! Great work!! I think the hairs around the face look great!! To nitpick...the left nostril can use a bit more shaping I think. Not much, the curve looks a bit flat.

The shadow just under the bottom lip is a tiny bit too dark, or severe. It looks forced or fake. A bit of softening and maybe some opacity would do the trick.

Also, where the hair parts at the top, the detail of the strands should go right to the scalp, maybe not as detailed, but there should be a hint of strands there instead of just solid color and the strands ending just before the part.

Lastly, the left eyebrow looks like it could begin further closer to the nose-line. As it stands now, it looks like she tweezed her eyebrow a bit too much :p. Just a few more hairs to even it out would be perfect.

I'm sorry to be so picky...please forgive me :p Overall it's a wonderful image!! I love the sparkles in her hair which give it kind of a fantasy look. A definite 8+
 
Avatar acidlullaby

 08/26/03 @873

thanks christinee, no need to apologize, this is the kind of comment everyone should leave, helpful and constructive ^_^
 
Avatar cupcake

 08/26/03 @888

Very Sweet.
 
Avatar klept

 08/26/03 @928

looks great... i wouldn't worry that much about the hair on her face. christinee already said everything else that needed saying lol
 
e-r-r-o-r

 08/27/03 @961

great color mood!
 
Avatar PeachySticks

 08/27/03 @141

I got myself a new Wacom too ^_^ Much easier to paint with than the stupid mouse! :p

Hair looks great, and I love the skin tone you've chosen. But of course you want constructive criticism. ;) Okay. The catchlight in her eyes look a tad wrong; maybe that's what it really looks like as I haven't seen the source photo. I think it should cover more of the pupil, instead of just sitting around it. The eyes don't look very even (I *know* it's difficult to get it right>_<;). Her left eye--our right--is a little squished. A good trick to try is flip the picture, it's easier to spot the trouble spot that way. And her eyebrows could be less blurry, since she has individual strands of lovely defined hair.

:)
 
PhilipStraub

 08/27/03 @210

well done...I'm really fond of this.
 
Avatar kness

 08/27/03 @414

Good work , i agree with Peachysticks. Try to flip your picture, problems will appear clearly to you ;)
 
Avatar joshc529

 08/27/03 @426

Nice Work- really captivating
 
Avatar ANTIFAN

 08/28/03 @803

Nice work!
 
Avatar Nyhtmare

 08/29/03 @970

It's wonderful! The only thing that really bothers me is what christinee said, and that's the line under the lip..seems too harsh...otherwise this is fantastic :) Keep up the good works!
 
Avatar Baybeestar

 08/29/03 @457

:) I like, great work!
 
MacPiper

 08/29/03 @654

wow great painting. i want to say i happen to like the hairs on the face, much nicer than having a hair helmet.

something about the mouth and nose relationship bugs me though, it doesn't seem quite there yet.
 
statique

 08/30/03 @007

nose smaller lips boigger... anyway nice.. .:)
 
Avatar Aksu

 09/01/03 @408

great work....
 
Eineerha

 09/05/03 @306

awesome!! i love the colours especially. aagh i HAVE to get me a tablet.
love the title too
some things though...the strands of hair seem a little misplaced and unfinished here and there, and the left side of her lips are slightly off.
but aside from that, lovely lovely piece ^^
 
TheMailMan

 09/24/03 @130

Nice eyes. looks kinda like an EX of mine. :)
 
Avatar carpenoctem

 10/03/03 @857

The eyes look pretty creepy XD But I like the nose the most.
 
My3blka

 10/10/03 @865

Nice work, good colors
 
Avatar marius

 10/12/03 @868

I like this one a lot. :]
 
UniqueMystique

 10/21/03 @881

very unique............I like it
 
Avatar Anubis

 11/06/03 @751

I can feal the look of your work!! Fantastic, is as if they were alive!! +10
 
Avatar GoTo

 12/04/03 @380

Very beautiful work ! But the nose shock me somehow.. i find it too big, but it's only my opinion ^^
 
Avatar PurgedKel

 12/22/03 @457

stunning... beautiful... cold (in a happy sort of way)
I like the chilled effect.
Great work :)
 
Wolflover

 12/23/03 @575

That's great work I like the hair and eyes.
 
dekline

 12/30/03 @337

This looks really cool only thing is that her eyes are too big
 
Corona

 01/05/04 @045

I think this looks GREAT, only one thing... the nose seems to stick out far at the tip of it, I think this is because it is bright. LOVE the small strands of hair on her face, very well done +6!
 
trumpeyes

 01/10/04 @255

don't like the left part of the nose and her chin with chaw is like of a kid or a fat person- the way how it's shaded but love the eyes how it kinda mismeriseing. I'm not trying to put you down or give a bad replie either.
 
litheil

 01/17/04 @865

Wow. The coloring is really impressive, just as the whole thing is. ^^ I think the nose looks fine, and same with the eyes.. in fact, she looks like the girl who sits next to me in Biology class. Something about the nose also reminds me of Liv Tyler.

Anyway, it's wonderful work--everything in your gallery is wonderful! Great job, I hope so see more soon.
 
Avatar MissK

 04/09/04 @783

Nice...love the eyes..:)
 
Avatar Grafiker

 04/09/04 @846

amazing...
 
Avatar Meagan

 07/03/04 @306

one of the best portraits ive seen
 
Avatar noth1ng

 01/30/05 @707

gosh!! those eyes...........
 
Avatar sam-pipebomb

 10/20/05 @455

beautiful
 
Avatar JordanRoots

 08/05/06 @133

I don't know if someone already pointed it out but the nose is too big. I like this one a lot too. You're awesome. +8
 
Avatar aniocean

 06/13/07 @627

I like your drawing skill so much. Good work :)
 
Avatar Daykan

 06/24/07 @946

Lost this??? Wow , it´s soooooo beautiful!!
 
Avatar teseracto

 08/18/07 @149

wow!
beatifull, eyes colors are amazing!
 
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